You Viewpoint

Instructions: Adjust the tone of the sentences below to the "you" viewpoint. For example:

Weak: I am including you on the list of advisers.
Revised:You are being included on the list of advisers.

1. I would like to inform you that your input made a difference in our decision.

Your Answer:

Reveal Revised Sentence
Your input made a difference in our decision.

2. I have received your proposal within the deadline.

Your Answer:

Reveal Revised Sentence
Your proposal arrived within the deadline.

3. Our company would like to inform you that your application can be resubmitted after 30 days.

Your Answer:

Reveal Revised Sentence
You can resubmit your application after 30 days.

4. I am interested in learning more about the program that was designed by you.

Your Answer:

Reveal Revised Sentence
Please tell me more about the program you designed.

5. I would like to encourage you to consider applying for the job.

Your Answer:

Reveal Revised Sentence
You should consider applying for the job.